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I would like feedback on my game

A topic by banana_bread_1 created 19 days ago Views: 79 Replies: 3
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This is my first time making a game demo level and I would like your feedback on it.

Game Title: Claymaker of Saidpur

Playable Link: https://banana-bread-1.itch.io/claymaker-of-saidpur

Platform: Web (for now)

Description: Claymaker of Saidpur is a calm, story-focused point and click puzzle game set in Saidpur Village, Pakistan. I’ve made it with hand-drawn digital art, inspired by the textures, colours and stories of the place. The game follows the fictional story of a clay potter who, 120 years ago, built a clay train using nothing but imagination and the earth around him. His story isn’t shown in the game, but it shapes the world you explore now. As you move through the village, you solve small puzzles, find clues, and discover bits of his life and legacy. The whole game is meant to highlight traditional values, local craft, and the calm feeling of exploring an old village full of memories. It’s made for a niche audience that enjoys slow, gentle games that focus more on atmosphere and discovery than action.

Free to Play Status:

  • Free to play
  • Demo available

Involvement: I made this game from scratch. Also this is my first time making a game.

After Playing, please fill out this form if you can ! I would like feedback on whether the game art accurately portrays saidpur village or not
 https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfzb3hr4XmW2TS8powJxfg_jPn1BUFn9E_gZbiF...

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I played the game. I liked it. I didn't win. I found the monkey, but could not figure out how to get the train back. the art is cute. The game was fun. 10/10.

Metro Chaos - Free metro management game with story mode, survival, and real-time multiplayer

Hey everyone! 👋

I've been working on Metro Chaos for the past several months and I'm excited to finally share it with you, in its first version!

🎮 Play here: https://chamitro.github.io/metro_chaos/

What is it?

A metro management strategy game where you transport passengers, upgrade stations, and try not to let the system collapse into chaos!

Features:

- 🚇 Story Mode - 20 progressively challenging levels

- ⏱️ Survival Mode - Endless mode, see how long you can last

- 🎮 Versus Mode - Online real-time multiplayer battles against friends or other players

- 💰 Resource management and strategic upgrades

- 🌐 Completely free, browser-based (no download needed)

How to play:

Click stations to send trains, transport passengers efficiently, earn money to upgrade, and complete objectives before time runs out. Simple to learn, challenging to master!

Multiplayer challenge:

The versus mode runs on a dedicated server that I'm maintaining out of pocket. If you enjoy the game and want to help keep the multiplayer servers running (and support future updates), there's an optional Ko-fi link in the game menu. Absolutely not required - the game is 100% free regardless! ☕

Would love to hear your feedback, whether it's bugs, feature requests, or just your high scores! What do you think could make it better?

Thanks for checking it out! 🙏

Played the game, took two attempts because I was enjoying the art the first time. Game description says it casual (which it is) However, the timer countdown takes away from that slightly. I see there is a leaderboard, maybe having the timer counting up instead of down so it doesn't limit payers to 5 minutes, but offers incentive to complete it faster to get on the leaderboard.  Just my thoughts, but good work. 

If you have 5 minutes, any feedback for my own game would be great. It is my first attempt at making a game and its the first part of a much bigger plan. when playing what feels good, bad etc. See itch.io link below.  https://dallas-91.itch.io/revers-tower-defense-maze