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A jam submission

Dream verseView game page

Collect dream crystals and take control of your dream
Submitted by Ryukai999 — 1 day, 45 minutes before the deadline
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Dream verse's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Graphics#2342.2452.750
Theme#2511.9392.375
Overall#2701.8582.275
Audio#2771.6332.000
Originality & Innovation#2801.8372.250
Fun & Game Design#2941.6332.000

Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

Hiii!! I’ll make a constructive comment. The game itself is not bad (is indeed fun, but very short). In my experience playing and making videogames, the core concepts are:

  1. Graphic design. The background need to be less complicated to “read”. Try to use some free assets in Itch.io for create some dream-like scenary. Maybe some Parallax (optional) and ready.

  2. Music and sfx. The music is too repetitive. There’s a lot of free resources in itch.io and in internet to use. Also sfx. In this type of games are essential. Sfx (and vfx also) bring a game to a new life and improve the experience.

  3. Intro and story, and controls info. Maybe a few lines, maybe an animation… But something to put the lore to the player.

  4. The attack animation is cool, bro, but if you are walking the attack soon gets behind the player. You need to fix this.

  5. Of course, more levels, power-ups, puzzles, etc. Game Desing is key.

Your cool points of this game:

  1. I really love the player sprite. Need more polishing, but the death animation is SUPERBE hehehe. Also the enemy. There’s no sfx or vfx but you know when are hurtin an enemy because they “jump”.

  2. The story. There’s not much info, but with a good intro text maybe you can improve this part.

  3. The mechanics. Are well implemented. Quite good.

Congratulations!

Developer(+1)

Hello i appreciate the constructive feedback. I will agree that the game is very short and is only due to the constrand time limit of the jam i will continue to add levels to the game and will definitely add sfx and vfx i whould also agree that the muaic is very bad i didn't expect any comments to note good things about the music it is very basic and plain and just bad lol hahahaha and again was due to the time li.it i plan to add better music and sfx along with vfx. Again thanks for the feed back and whould appreciate it if you whould take the time to nit pick some things about the game the more feedback the better!!!!

Submitted(+1)

I like the hand-drawn attack animation. 

Submitted

The art in itself isn't necessarily bad, but put together it results in an extremely hard to read game.

The movement feels quite off, and attacking is very janky.

Overall, it's a good attempt, though further work needs to be made.

Developer

thank you for all the fed back I find it very constructive and will take it into very carful consideration. could you mabey point out some specific things that could be fixed?

Submitted

Good One. Nice engaging music!!

Submitted
It's good, it can improve with more time.