The opening is too slow.
I feel like the same shot of the (pretty) woods was shown three times, and none of those times left me with an impression of what the scene is for.
What is the point of this game? I’m guessing it’s supernatural mystery to find something by going through a forest and an abandoned cabin? Why?
The music sounds cliché. It specifically sounds like the music in a shooter game-style film I was in many, many years ago, which made me feel very old in internet years.
The harsh whispering at the end went on too long, becoming annoying, felt missplaced, and gave me new info about what to expect. Maybe put a couple seconds of it at the opening.
I’m pretty sure the graphics would crash my computer. (This might be the least usable feedback.)
Now, give pay me back me back by ___ __day or else I’ll have to ____ ___ __ _______.