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Hello, fellow strangers!

I'm looking for feedback on my visual novel «What’s wrong in Oakwood Hills» and I'd appreciate your help with that.

I released it a few months ago, but I didn't get any feedback, so I would like to hear your opinion on the storyline and the overall narrative, as well as your general impression of the game, if possible. The game itself about 30-60 minutes to play, so it won't take up much of your time.

Thank you in advance for your feedback and any comments with your opinion about the game!

Большое спасибо за развернутый отзыв! <з

WELCOME TO OAKWOOD HILLS!

Oakwood Hills is a typical small town in the American heartland where nothing ever happens. It seems that the biggest events in the town's history were the construction of Becky's Diner, famous throughout the county for its milkshakes, and the opening of the local power station.

Despite its simplicity, this place has three main advantages: clean air, beautiful landscapes, and an oak forest surrounding the town on all sides and hiding dozens of different lakes.

Sounds pretty good, right? But what is really hidden behind the picture of the perfect town?

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ABOUT THE GAME

Rated: 16+

Genre: Detective

Ambiance: Welcome to the 80s, where you can enjoy local milkshakes, wander the outskirts of town, and listen to local rock music.

Narrative: The game immerses you in Oakwood Hills, a small town that only at first glance seems quiet and peaceful. Experience the daily life of one of the local families, preparing for the town's tranquility to be replaced soon by something completely different.

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NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR

«What's wrong in Oakwood Hills» is just the beginning of the events taking place in the town. Give this little story a chance, immerse yourself in it, and if you like it, leave a comment.

As the author, I would very much like to continue this story (I already have further plot ideas and new interactive features for the game in my notes), but this will be possible only if Oakwood Hills finds a place in your hearts.

Enjoy the game!

And thank you for visiting Oakwood Hills!

I'm trurly in love with the design!

she looks stunnin

woow

i love the story

I really like how the game looks

im in love with the design

I think about THEM all the time...

I fall at the feet of the author of this game

im in loooove

I fall in love with this game at the first sight of it, wow

I love the design of this game!

calm and cozy!

Thank you!

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