If you want to point out any typos you can join my discord server here, I have a dedicated channel for typos where people can point out anything odd. It's also easier for me to have all the reported typos for my VNs in one place.
Yuel and Tavi have a very fun dynamic, they're a lot of fun to write... My most beloved boys 🙏
The censorship in this VN has nothing to do with Itchio's policies. The artist for this VN is Japanese, and it's illegal for Japanese artists to draw genitals. It goes against the Obscenity Act, and Japanese artists can literally be sent to prison for drawing uncensored sex scenes. This is also why all Japanese r18 games, manga, etc are censored in a similar way.
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In the scene Eva uses the word 'constant' it makes sense. She's telling Tavi not to be faithful to Yuel, and 'constant' is a synonym for 'faithful', 'devoted', 'loyal', etc etc
The other two are errors and I will fix them later, thank you for pointing them out.
I already have a proofreader and they catch a lot of typos and errors, but some small things will always slip though the cracks, it's inevitable.
the loading screen is super cute, i love bat genzou and rabbit iggy... they r very precious
also really like orlam's design here, his hair looks less ??? than usual haha
iggy feels a lil different here than in ow, ig b/c of the differing tones of the two stories? also probably b/c he has a different backstory now and isn't burdened by Immense Guilt all the time haha
i want to say this iggy feels more chill but he's still very awkward and self-conscious so ig chill is not the right word... but his anxieties feel less based in self-hatred and they're more played for comedy here. i feel like he became significantly more oblivious too lol but it facilitated some fun jokes
i think iggy and genzou have a fun dynamic, i also enjoy the contrast between iggy thinking genzou is the world's most charming man and orlam being very "you are such an artless philistne" lmao
there's a lot of cool stuff done w the sprites too, i really liked the framing of the iggy/genzou dance scene, and iggy vibrating so excitedly when he talks about video games. it was very cute haha
it's very polished and well put together in terms of visuals, and the character dynamics are rly fun. i like the light-hearted tone (even if you do drama and angst very well) and i enjoyed reading it, this was a lot of fun!
ooh i liked this one a lot, the writing was vey evocative and descriptive, and i really liked all the character designs. i know a lil bit about lady bathory myself so i recognised that all of the servant names lined up w her actual irl servants + the details about her husband and family, it was clearly well-researched. some of the language felt a bit modern at times given the historical setting but i didn't mind it, it gave the characters more personality.
this was a fun read, i enjoyed it. i think i saw every ending, too. thank you for making it!
ty i'm glad you enjoyed it
i feel like making tavi the alpha and yuel the omega would be too obvious and i wanted to change things up a bit vs their usual dynamic since i thought it would be more fun to write, hopefully it still worked out.
i'm getting spam links on all of my vns tbh, it's just worse on the r18 ones.
itchio also removed a bunch of vns off the site altogether recently based on certain key words devs used in the description (and also maybe comments i'm not sure) so i decided to turn comments off on where the heart rests too just to be safe. i did read your comment before i disabled them though, and thank you, i'm glad you liked it!
You can find all of my commercial VNs on Steam here, and all of my free VNs which aren't on Steam are here (though idk if you'll be able to view this since there's some r18 games mixed in).
i like writing 1st person narrators with a lot of inner thoughts, i think it's fun... it makes them feel more realistic to me haha, but idk maybe other people don't think about 1001 things all the time like me
i am an angst enjoyer too, but my most angsty bl vn is this commercial one here... it made my proofreader cry multiple times lol so that was fun
if you want a more dour bl story from me that's free you can maybe check this one out, it's a bit of a mix of gloom and hope which was meant to feel ever so slightly seedy... this is an r18 story though and it deals w/ some potentially uncomfy subjects.
and thank you very much!
oooh ic! i presumed they were filtered photos cause they have this kind of dreamy/ethereal sort of look to them, but it makes sense they'd be blury if they were taken from video footage when your car was in motion
that's really cool, i think bit of a blurriness of the bgs adds a lot to the atmosphere
i also saw in the about that you recorded most of the sfx too, which is also very cool! i liked the rumbling of the car on the road and the cicadas, the use of audio is very immersive!
really nice ambience and atmosphere, i love the sound effects and the music. the photos are really nice too, i think filtered photo bgs work really well with serious/grounded stories like this and it adds a nice sombre atmosphere to everything.
hmm is ivy called ivy because she has a smothering/claustrophobic presence and she forces herself on dahlia? i imagine her name has some thematic weight just like dahlia's
































































