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Hey man, that was amazing! Congratulations, it was one of my favorites so far. I really liked how you managed to explore different themes within the same vibe, with contrasts and junctions at certain moments. It was one of the best harmonic counterpoints I've seen at the Jam so far. Honestly, I don't think I have anything to suggest for improvement. The harmony is magnificent, it fits perfectly with the OST's concept. I just wanted to thank you and congratulate you. The experience of listening to this was sensational.

Wow! I confess that listening to these tracks was a really interesting experience. I really liked how you articulated the harmony, despite the simple counterpoint. I believe your relationship with the theme was very intrinsic, and you managed to convey a very "playable" idea and message, so to speak. Congratulations, Eetu! As a point for improvement, I would say that you could have diversified the tonality more between the different tracks, exploring different themes for each creative space. But overall, it's all very good. It was a pleasure.

Hi! I really enjoyed listening to it. So far, it's the most well-articulated track I've heard in this somewhat synthesized style. The harmony and counterpoint are simple, but they work well together. I believe you managed to be quite complete for the concept. I think the only thing I would improve would be to explore more themes within the same track; sometimes it sounded a bit repetitive, but not in a bad way.

Hi! I listened to your tracks and found the concept very interesting. I think it's unique and different from anything I've heard around here. You managed to capture the essence of the theme well, but in a very well-articulated way. Congratulations! As for points of improvement, I think you could enrich the harmonic foundation with more layers, but the articulation really captivated me. I loved listening to it! The pads with the piano and synthesizers won me over.

Hey! That was truly amazing. I loved how you built the build-ups and the tension that creates anticipation for something bigger. Your writing is very precise in conveying the feeling, although I believe there could be more instrumental articulation responsible for sustaining the harmony in the background. But that doesn't detract from the experience of listening to the tracks. However, congratulations! You managed to capture the essence very well.

Hey! Thanks so much for your comment. Yeah, I've noticed some of the points you mentioned. In fact, I was planning to rewrite the whole suite and add a third movement. I'll make good use of your tips.

Hey! Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback — I’m really glad you enjoyed it. My goal was to create something profound (as the name “Vathys” suggests, which literally means “deep/abyssal”), but still full of life. Simple, yet powerful — that’s what I was aiming for.
And to answer your question, I based it entirely on what I felt when I looked at the Great Comet painting.

Hello! I'd like to ask about taking screenshots from my DAW. I work with orchestral pieces and I usually write my music in MuseScore Studio 4, directly on the score. So, would there be any problem if I sent a screenshot of my workspace in MuseScore?

Hello! I'm Proeolipe, and I'm a piano composer looking for a team to work with. I'm able! Please, if you have interest call me discord: proeo