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I love the SCP's and there is so much potential, some of the stories were pretty fun, I noticed the beginning chapters were a bit obtuse because there were too many decrepitations between the dialogues.

Example:

You speak in a surprised and calm tone: "And there you are I've been looking all over for you, not really I just walked in."

By adding the "You speak in a surprised and calm tone" is not necessary in some instances because the reader can infer the emotion from the dialogue.

This is just a suggestion. But when using dialogue if you want the reader to identify the characters you can use colors or the name at the beginning.

Rick: Hey guys how is it going! 

Aside from that it is a very good collaboration and there were some really interesting stories and concepts. 

Is just for people now a days condensed text can be intense to go through if they are seeking a more nuanced experience. 

Some images or sound would have really helped to portray an even more complete experience.